Final visualscript


Scene 1

EXTERIOR : Railway station.

The story starts in an uncrowned railway station.

A gloomy evening. A pan shot:  from rail tracks to the station platform revealing the station name sign board  , waiting shed on the background. (Cam _ 1)

The protagonist sitting in a bench on the waiting shed with a carry bag and his suitcase kept next to him.

He seems little bit confused and occupied with a sheet of paper holding in his hand.

POV revealing he sheet of paper he holding is a map (magical map) with a caricature of a happy smiling person on the bottom left corner .

Cut back to protagonists mid shot revealing his face with a plaster, he touches the plaster and looks back to the map

cut to the map {establishing the fare n clear skin of the char face}

A tilt down shot from behind the clock ticking to 6’O clock. followed by the gibberish announcement of the loud mike .The protagonist looks towards the cam(clock)

Cut back to protagonists mid shot looking back to the map

POV of magical map, a blinking dot approaching towards the station mark in the map/ sound of train approaching.

Cut back to protagonists  [mid shot]  looking on map , the light falling on his face irrupted by the passing train

Back to (Cam _ 1) the train comes to halt in the station, stops with squeaking sounds of the engine wheels

Scene 2

Train interior – Corridor

The protagonist entering into the train with his luggage’s walking towards the cabin {camera} , camera turns with him as he turns towards the cabin door.

POV- He slide’s opens the door, < CUT > as he enters the cabin.

Scene 3

Train interior – Cabin

POV- opens the door as he enters the cabin. a lady is sitting next to the window seat  and a small boy playing with a balloon looks  towards the protagonist.(cam).

Cam rotates all around the cabin as he looks around , the other seats seems to be occupied with luggage’s , a small hold on the seat number  and looks up to the upper birth, another character with a news paper on his hand  looks towards him with an angry expression.

TILT UP CAM from other side of cabin: The protagonist looks down and keeps his luggage beneath the seats and adjusts himself  sitting next to the boy  with his suitcase on his lap.

Mid shot : of boy and protagonist sitting together, The boy keeps  looking at the Protagonist ,and as he turns himself to look the child with a warm smile ,the child turns away his head looking to other direction as he doesn’t like to make a company with  him.

he realises the negligence and his face turns sad and looks down to his suitcase holds it tightly and sits.

CUT TO – The train whistle and steam exhaust with the sirens to start….

CUT TO – The wheels turns with the engine shafts.

CUT TO – View through the window as the station passing by.

Side shot{mid} of  MC  looking at his  suitcase , he looks up to the upper birth man

TILT UP : The upper birth man seems  slept, covering his face with the newspaper .

Side shot{mid} of  boy  playing with balloon.

Side shot{mid} of lady next to window busy doing her work ——————-.

CUT TO – View through the windows train travels through hills and woods.

The sun sets behind the hills.



Scene 3

   EXTERIOR – TILT UP: tracks in between dense woods, Train approaches towards camera with lights on. Passes  over camera.

Scene 4

Train interior:

Close up of light

A popping up sound is heard ,the MC looks alarmed with a jerk, the suitcase in his lap jumps little bit suddenly, he holds it firm, his eye balls looks here and there wondering anyone noticed it or not ,he turns towards others wondering  did anyone noticed it.

It seems the boy haven’t noticed , and he is busy with his balloon.

MC takes out the map again and looks into it

POV – the shining dot is moving through the rails on the diagram.

MC again touches the plasters on his face and moves his fingers over the suitcase, looking at it.

make some incident in which the balloon got busted because of the MCs activity…………

Sudden sound of balloon burst, The MC turns towards the child.CAM pan to child’s face.

CUT TO – Childs face ,stars crying

Mid shot of boy n MC – mc turns towards cam as he wonders what to do to console the child.

He tries to console the child , he try making faces to child to prevent him from cry, he changes his faces expressions gradually to grab his attention , his weird expressions seems no effect to the child’s cry

Suddenly a mole pops on the other side of his face(where there is no plaster).{with the similar popping sound}

The child’s face changes to a surprised look ,

The MC got stuck on the pose both his eye ball rolls towards the direction of the mole, another mole pops up all of a sudden.

The excited child laughs and claps his hand watching what he saw.

MC got alarmed  and again the bag starts to jump on his lap he grabs the bag and try to condemn it,

MC looks around

It seems everyone is noticing him now, the man on upper birth, the lady and child staring at him – CUT SHOTS

he covers the moles with his left hand gets up from his seat holding the suitcase opens the cabin slide door in a hurry and runs out of the cabin.

Scene 5

MOVING TRAIN : EXTERIOR –  inside view of train through the windows

PAN SHOT – MC running on corridor with his hand covering his face.


Scene 6


he pulls opens the door and gets into the toilet, shut the door and leans on the door with his back holding the suitcase on his chest with both hands.

pan as he moves from there to his left towards the shelf next to the sink and mirror.

MC keeps the SC on the shelf

SIDE SHOT: MID – MC starts examine his face on the mirror.

POV from mirror: MC touches his face and seems sad sawing those moles in his face, his facial exp changes into an aggressive one he turns towards the SC , unlocks it and opens .

MATCH CUT:  POV of MC , the box is full of bottles with moles ,the cam establishes the SC interior showing each  materials inside the case,  Bottles with mole, Scissors ,Knives, Plasters, a photograph of MC and his friend with lots of moles on their face smiling and posing for the photo(_the friend one whose photograph was therein the map).

CUT TO : MID MC keeps one of the bottle on the sink and a plaster role,

POV from mirror: MC standing with scissors, and aim it towards the mole looking to the CAM.

CUT TO : as the scissors blade is about to cut the mole it starts glowing.

CUT TO : The bottle with moles kept on the sink also glows

CUT TO : The SC loaded with Bottles glows.

CUT TO : MID : MC back side sill wet on the cutting pose and full glow on bg.

Scene 7


The glow is coming out from the toilet window ,(sound a train approaching from a distance) It got blocked by another goods train passing on foreground , the glow flashes as it is revealed by the goods trains gaps in between exposing the light towards CAM.—————————————–CUT TO BLACK


TILT DOWN : to the sink where the glowing mole is felt n gradually fading down MCs hand comes into frame and picks up the mole.

CLOSE UP : of MC holding the bottle in front of his eyes and puts the mole into it the glow fades out from the mole and the glow dies.

CLOSE UP : of suitcase where MC keeps back the bottle with moles.

POV: from cam he turns back to mirror with a sad expression on his face touches/checks the new bandage on his face , then he slowly opens his shirt revealing more bandages in his body all over his chest.

he looks down to his chest he close his shirt looks back to mirror /cam takes a deep breath.

CUT TO : CLOSE UP : of suitcase closing….>>>> MATCH CUT

Scene 8


>>>> MATCH CUT  : slide opening the cabin door

TILT UP CAM from other side of cabin: the child is sleeping in the lower birth as he enters am and lady on upper births. he looks the boy .

CUT TO : MID :MC s POV of the child sleeping in the seat.

CUT TO : the lady sleeping on upper birth.

CUT TO : the man sleeping news paper covering his head on upper birth.

TILT UP CAM from other side of cabin: the MC Looking up ,he sits on the seat next to the child

MID SHOT of MC sitting holding his suitcase close to his chest, he leans towards the case gradually as he felt into sleep.



Scene 9


POV from trains 3rd compartment moving through the bridge approaching the tunnel, as the train enters the tunnel light fades into black.

Scene 10

                                                                        DREAM SEQUENCE

2D in experimental line drawings on Kari (smoke on glass)

The train getting out from the tunnel from the ear, its moving in darkness

it runs on surface all around the face  cheeks n nose etc  as the camera follows to trains POV gaint moles pops up in the landscape

one of the mole pops up from the rail in front of train , as train approaches to the giant mole and about to hit . CUT TO.

Scene 11

CUT TO : close up of MCs eyes opening in a jerk as he got scared by the night mare/ a shuffling sound on BG as the bag is rumbling.

hi s eye ball moves down top his lap amused what’s happening.

MID SHOT : the MCs suite case is shaking n jumping vigorously on his lap , the box jumps off from his lap.

GROUND LEVEL : the suitcase falling in the ground next to the cabin door

POV of MC box starts rolling over towards the cabin door as its trying to get out from the cabin , still rolling.

CLOSE UP of MC in an amusement what the hell is happening .then he looks to the map in his hand

The magical map showing it reached the destination in the woods and the indicator point is blinking vigorously as its telling him something.

CLOSE UP of MC , he looks up from the map ,and turns to the side windows , checking where he have reached.

POV through the window …..

There is some fancy glitters happening in the woods , as he can vaguely see them the train passes the scene gaining more speed. As the place is falling back ,he got confused what to do.

CLOSE UP of MC , looking down  to his case.

Scene 12


MC got pulled out by the bag to the corridor and pulled towards the cam….

POV track shot  of MC, as he is pulled towards the door by the suitcase through the corridor .

Back profile shot of MC stoping next to the door.

Scene 13

exterior shot of train door opened by MC ,he leans forward and looks towards the lights in wood passed by CAM ZOOMS BACK , trees passing in the foreground as camera pans with train.

CONTINUE : Scene 12

Shoulder shot of MC looking to the lights in woods from the moving train.

Again Back profile shot of MC standing at the door and looking out. retains steady position and looks up here and there inside the compartment.

Close up of pull liver.

POV of MC from pull liver.

CUT TO : train tires squeaking and stopping in rails with sparks.

Scene 14


LONG SHOT  TRAINS SIDE ANGLE , a box got thrown from trains door , it felts down on the track in the dark

CLOSE SHOT of fallen luggage box, the MCs  steps next to it, close up of his leg reaching the ground. He picks up the luggage and blindly runs towards the  woods where he saw lights. into the darkness.

POV camera pulled back, as he runs away from the train .

MID camera pulled back with MC, as he runs away from the train .train on BG

Scene 15

LONG : Trains siren sounds with whistle, trains engine starts  the lights reflection on the trees next to track gradually  diapers  as the train moves away.

Darkness ,only the MCs foot steps are heard as he runs away….as he get lost in the darkness his footsteps declines .


Scene 16

MID SHOT of suitcase , light emits from the case , CAM pulled up as he raises the case to his head level to check out what is happening.  case fading and glowing, suddenly it pull MC to a direction…

CUT TO LONG SHOT: MC is been pulled to different places in the woods , right to left of screen FG, left to right MID G, right to left of screen BG. MC stops in middle of the woods as suddenly the suitcase pull stops.

LONG shot MC pulls up the case and looks at it curiously.

A distant sound interrupts him {owl/wolf howl} MC looks at the direction of sound , as he was afraid he slowly steps backwards by keep looking at the sounds direction.

 Another sound interrupts him from behind very next to him in the bushes , with a jerk MC turns and looks at the bushes , of that excitement what he had seen MC falls backward to the ground

CUT TO > TILT UP MID : MC looking to cam from the ground holding the suitcase (light still emitting)

MC’s POV  mid: there is some thing glittering in the darkness, it appears to be some glowing red eyes staring at him.

CUT  BACK TO > TILT UP MID : MC looking to cam from the ground holding the suitcase and gathering his carry bag by the other hand , he looks at the direction where the bag had fallen.

MC’s POV  mid: another pair of glowing red eyes staring at him next to his bag .

TRACK SHOT> Pullback :CLOSE MID of MC running, holding the suitcase in his front ,scared and yelling. Simultaneously turning his head back checking, is he been followed.

CUT TO : CLOSE UP of MC’s foot steps running.SLOW MOTION as his foot hits a rock in the ground….

CUT TO : SLOW MOTION ,MID SHOT > Tilt up the MC fly’s in mid air, falling to ground, the suit case also opens because of the hits impact all the glowing bottles are also suspended /flying in the air with him.

CUT TO : CLOSE UP one of the glowing jar falls on the ground and breaking…

CUT TO : a CLOSE UP of broken bottles and open (face down), one of the unbroken container rolls towards him..(LIGHTING)

MID SHOT the MC picking up the bottle n sits up holding it n looking to it emotionally.  the opened bag and other  broken bottles shattered allover the place in his BG.

A LONG SHOT : A POV of some one else looking where MC had fallen ,lights can be seen from the broken containers, silvet of trees, rocks and bushes on mid ground.

Close up of MC looking at the glowing mole container holding on his hand. gradually some bouquet of different colored lights are appeared on his distant background and moving here and there.MC keeps looking at bottle as he is unaware of the other moving lights.

TRACK IN shot POV of some one who is approaching towards MC siting in ground holding the container from his back.

CUT  BACK TO > CLOSE UP : MC looking at the glowing mole container holding on his hand.  bouquet of different colored lights background are now approaching towards him .MC lifts his head with an excited expression as he realized that some thing is approaching to him from behind.CAM PULLED BACK TO A LONG SHOT revealing the BG with different colored lights approaching him from different direction in the dark woods.

MC turns back in a swift action

MATCH CUT : TRACK IN shot POV of stranger approaching to MC who just turned back and looking at the cam reaches very next to him MC looks excited all around him to each lights..

TILT UP , POV of MC as he looks up. To an empty frame five hands with glowing bottle lanterns enter into the frame, slowly revealing five characters entering to from all three direction holding them(bottles).                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          The lighting should only be sufficient in a way  to vaguely reveal the character one who is in the middle in the search party who is MC’s child hood friend who send him the magical map map.He looks at him with a warm welcoming smile.(all of them do have glowing moles allover their body)

CUT SHOT’S showing their moles glowing.

POV of friend TILT DOWN : CLOSE UP> of MC looking at him with amusement, gradually his facial expression turning into a relaxed happy smile. Suddenly a glowing mole pops up from his face. ZOOM IN to the mole and freeze.DIP TO BLACK.

***************** THE END*****************



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